Well I saw the De-Feminized fanedit, and i must say i thought it was quite an improvement on the original.
However this fanedit has a ways to go before its a classic in my eyes. so I used my elbow grease and did the tough work of doing a proper cut, the EditMan way.
Please be nice because its my first fanedit fanedit, there are few mistakes, but overall I think i did justice to the Star Wars series, props to Rian Johnson for doing it. I tried to preserve the unique aspects of star wars, such as the awesme space battles and the funny robot
Cool tip for all Star Wars faneditors: if you crossfade any random two portions of a John Williams soundtrack by 0.05ms, it sounds acceptable. If you crossfade by 0.15ms, it doesn't like you edited anything at all.. i discovered this
--EditMan3000